tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7886012664101078763.post1688382384999674339..comments2011-05-10T10:28:02.273-07:00Comments on EnglishClass.Blog: My most unusual journeyM° Graciahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12014957150612067183noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7886012664101078763.post-9044609966758176952011-04-12T07:30:33.076-07:002011-04-12T07:30:33.076-07:00Ma Gracia,
Ok, good final line. Check these thin...Ma Gracia,<br /><br />Ok, good final line. Check these things:<br /><br />"Last summer", not "THE last summer".<br />I went AROUND La Serena...<br />WITH my boyfriend..<br />... a car that was DRIVEN... <br />...we saw a lot of WHALES...<br />NOT "craft pisco", but HAND-MADE pisco.<br />"Was special traveling with my boyfriend make the journey very special for me"...<br />THAT IS NOT CLEAR.<br />"I ate a lot of shimp pais" (What's that?)Jorge Carrozahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14076748931068943227noreply@blogger.com